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Tuesday, 28 June 2011

RELATIONSHIP MATTERS.




Intro:
1)Hook:
There will be the ending for every beginning, it goes the same for the relationship between two human. Ending of the relationship is something that is full of emotions, though, it is a part and parcel of our life.

2)Background info:
  • not a perfect match
  • the couple going through a flat moment together
  • family matter
3)Thesis statement:
There are many ways to end up your relationship such as be honest to your partner, or you can also leave a note to your partner, or else, make a confession to your partner that you have married someone.

Body 1:
1)Topic:
In order to make the relationship over properly, you can meet up your partner and says the truth.

2)Support:
  • says to your partner that you don't feel the passion of the relationship
  • says that your partner is not your type
  • says those with manner and don't forget to asks for apologize
Body 2:
1)Topic:
If you not courage enough to do so, you can just leave a note as a medium.

2)Support:
  • For those who afraid to have a face-to-face conversation, you can apply this method
  • with this, your sentence and point will be well arranged
  • emotion for both parties also can be controlled.
Body 3:
1)Topic:
You can make a confession to your partner that you have married, although it is just a lie.

2)Support:
  • this will make your partner realize that you are no longer belong to them.
  • this would make them hate you so much and and the hatred drive them not to be with you anymore
Conclusion:
These are several method to break up with your partner. Although you can make use of these method, you should think wisely before making a decision in order to make your relationship's status crystal clear.



Written by; Muhammad Harris Fahmi Bin Ismail a.k.a. Harris Fahmi-EE-16299




Harris Fahmi
Electric&Electronic
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1 comment:

  1. Careful with your grammar.
    Too many controlling ideas in your thesis statement and you only mention 3 ideas in your body paragraph. Rephrase your thesis okay.
    Please revise the conclusion and your 3rd topic sentence.

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