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Tuesday, 28 June 2011

How to end a relationship

Name:Woon Tian Lok
matric:16067

Title : A Herculean Task
Hook : Relationship are complicated and even with all the good intentions , sometimes you have to end it for some reason .Therefore , the human that dump their partner are not villains and vamps.
Background information :The longer you stay with your boyfriend or girlfriend ,the more investment you’re giving to the relationship .The more difficult for us to break free.
Thesis statement : three way to end a relationship gracefully . When you want to end a relationship, you should give your partner some time to face the truth, you should communicate your problems with your partner honestly, the most important is do not use a third person or the phone to break up.
Body paragraph 1 :
Topic sentences: Give some time to your partner
Supporting statement-If you have to ended a relationship, then be ready to face it,do not start guilty.
-Try to strong emotionally.
-Do not give them false hope of returning back to them.
Body paragraph 2:
Topic sentences: Be honest to your partner
Supporting statement - It essentials that you first communicate your problems with your partner and tell them why you break up.
-Try to take out a solution of your problem .
-Even after this if nothing work up , you will not regret of the decisions you make .
Body paragraph 3 :

Topic sentences : No phone and friend to help you
Supporting statement -Be dignified enough to say break up with your partner.
-You should communicate directly with your partner
-Ever never tell your friend to help you.

Conclusion : -Sometimes you have to get to know someone really well to realize you’re really strangers
-There is only one life and living it in tears is not a right solution.

2 comments:

  1. Thesis statement should be in one sentence but I love your thesis statement.
    Where are the 3 topic sentences???
    Love the conclusion but can't find your thesis statement in your conclusion.

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