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Tuesday, 28 June 2011

HOW TO END A RELATIONSHIPS

TITLE: NEW LIFE WITHOUT ANY SPRINGS ATTACHED

Hook:
Ending a relationship is never easy when you've truly had enough and you're ready for freedom. But there are ways to make the break up go as smoothly as possible.

Background Information:
. Understandably, you are struggling to do it.
. Need to find a practical solutions on how to break up with someone that you have
been together with for a long time.
. Wrong moves or actions can lead to unwanted things to happen whereas tragedies and depressions can occur.

Thesis Statement:
. Many reasons can contribute to this break up decision making but mostly you know that you are just not meant for each other anymore.
. The simplest way to end a relationship is to firstly, make sure you are ready to to
do it, do it in person but mostly, try to be as honest as possible.
. Because he or she deserves to know the truth.

Body Paragraph 1
Topic Sentence: Ready to do it
Supporting Statement:
1) Think everything through deeply to avoid any regrets in the future.
2) Try to remember every moments and memories that you shared together and think it either is it worthy or not.
3) You have to stick with your decisions and do not get influenced easily as you may get back together.

Body Paragraph 2
Topic Sentence: Do it in person
Supporting Statement:
1) Breaking up with someone via text, email or even over the phone is totally disrespectful.
2) It is much more civilized if you do it in person and you can really explain
yourself so that your partner can understands it.
3) Besides, sometimes the truth hurts but you learn to live with it.

Body Paragraph 3
Topic Sentence: Be honest
Supporting Statement:
1) Tell him the reasons why you want to move on
2) Skip long, roundabout tales of why things won't work out and outline the facts.
3) Do make certain that she or he is aware that there is nothing wrong with her or that her actions led to this end.

Conclusion
Relationship is like you are in a maze. It is easy to come in but it is even harder to get out. You can either fine your way out or you are trapped inside.

BY,
HAZIRAH BINTI MOHD ABDUL RAUSHIN
16250
BUSINESS INFORMATION SYSTEM





1 comment:

  1. 'spring' or strings. LOL
    Thesis statement should be in 1 sentence only. Rephrase pls.
    The idea in your conclusion is good but you need to check your grammar.
    topic sentence need to be in a complete sentence, okay

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