How to end a relationship
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HOOK :
Breaking up is never easy for anyone.it involves a lot of pain and suffering.
BACKGROUND INFO :
-Ending a relationship with the one you love could be very sorrowful
-But,sometimes we cannot avoid it.
-So,what can you do to minimize pain for the other people and yourselves?
THESIS :
So in order to cope up with separation,one should be very strong enough and there are three simple steps to ending a relationship, such as thinking thoroughly, give some time for your partner to face the truth, communicate your problems with your partner.
BODY PARAGRAPH 1 – thinking thoroughly
*if you are not satisfied with your relationship and want to have a break up,then you have to be clear in mind about the reason for doing so.
*must not sound vague or nervous while stating your reasons.
*try to finish the matter as soon as possible.
BODY PARAGRAPH 2 – give some time for your partner to face the truth
*do not feel guilty once you have ended a relationship.
*try to act strong emotionally
*if your partner need some time then give them that time.
*But,never give them false hope of returning to them.
BODY PARAGRAPH 3 – communicate your problems with your partner
*communicate with your partner and do tell them,why you want to break up
*try taking out a solutionof your problems
*if nothing works,at least you would regret your decision afterwards
CONCLUSION :
There are many ways to break up a relationship between couples,but three ways stated above are just very common and I think they can minimize the pain and injury for the couple.
Some of people couldn’t find their perfect soulmate throughout their lifetime,so if you can find one,appreciate it……………….
I like your topic sentence 1 but where is the other topic sentence???
ReplyDeleteConclusion, hmmm need to be careful with your choice of words.
You have more than 1 topic in your thesis statement. It should have only 1 topic with 3 controlling ideas. You need to rephrase your thesis statement.