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Tuesday, 28 June 2011

How to end a relationship

Edmund Lau Jin Jie
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Foundation in chemical engineering

Title : Say Au Revior to your friends and partners

Introduction : Nowadays ,many people face a dilemma in ending or terminating a relationship with others .

Hook : Absence makes the heart grows fonder ,but sometimes it also makes the heart blossoms .Having a relationship sometimes is not necessary a good sign .The absence of a friend or a partner might give you a better life .

Background info : Many researches and surveys have shown that it is easy to begin a relationship with someone else .However ending a relationship will be a complete different story .Most of the people will have no idea at all how to end a relationship ,especially a long lasting one .

Thesis statement : In real life situation ,we may come across circumstances where we have to end a relationship .Nevertheless , making a perfect ending in a relationship will always make a better future in your life .There are several suggested ways to end a relationship properly so that we will face the least consequences after that .

Supporting statement 1 : -Be truthful to the person and convey the messages in your mind honestly to one .
-Convince the partner that ending the relationship is the best option and it is beneficial for both parties in the future .

- Be prepared for the worst situation such as partner's reluctance to end the relationship ,possible suicide attempts ,and etc .

Supporting statement 2 : Do not communicate with your partner frequently
Prohibit or restrict any possibility that might result in a success communication with each other .Examples - change the hand phone number and email address .
- Block your partner in facebook or create a new account .
Supporting statement 3 -seek advice from elders or people who are much more experienced in this matter .
- request parents from both parties to meet and discuss about the best solution to terminate the relationship .
- speak nicely and properly to your partners parents and explain to them why this relationship should be ended .Also request them to convince their child to accept the truth

Conclusion : Ending a relationship properly is crucial .Even though there are uncountable ways to do so ,choosing ways that are not desirable will maximize unwanted consequences and bad effects .Hence ,we must always think wisely and rationally to figure out a the best way to end a relationship .

1 comment:

  1. Your thesis is too vague. Your hook is good but I don't remember teaching you to include 1 sentence of introduction before your hook. Your hook should be the 1 sentence in your introduction paragraph.
    Where are the 3 topic sentences? Topic sentence is a complete sentence that is at the beginning of a paragraph.Yours???
    I like your conclusion.

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