HOW TO END A RELATIONSHIP
( The Best Ways to Have a New Life)
1. Hook
· Breaking up with someone that we are extremely in love with the couple could be heart breaking especially during the first love . We can still remember the memory before the couple breaking up. For example, a ringing phone at a particular time that formerly signified the voice of a loved one, but now that ringing sound must be deprived of its former significance. Although the scar remains deep inside,our journey must be continue like usual.
2. Background Info
· It never easy to let someone that we really love and not to easy to forget all the sweet momeries that we create since both of them meet.
· The capacity of love brings the relationship to be more closer each other in terms of emotically and physically to perform happily relationship before someone further the relationship
3. Thesis
· For me,the best way to start a new life without any problems with our ex by ending the relationship in order to reach the happiness in our life without any problems.
4. Body paragraph 1
· Be honest
- Be honest is one of the best ways to tell the truth the real problems in a relationship.
- Maybe the relationship can be more meaningful if the relation be continue just best friend forever (BFF)
5. Body paragraph 2
· Always remember God and the Sin
- Remember and obey with rules in the religion about the relationship
- Transgression of divine law
6. Body paragraph 3
· Threat them as you would like to be treated
- We must threat them as you would like to be treated which mean we must threat them the best although we are already breaking up
7. Conclusion
· In conclusion, we have to end the relationship with the good ways in order to prevent all the problems from happen and try to get back as a best friends. Although breaking up with someone is very toughest moment,we still have to continue with brand new life and maybe this is the best ways to have new life.
MUHAMMAD FAUZAN BIN MOHD IDRUS (15945) (BIS)
OMG, be careful with your grammar. You have good controlling ideas but you need to rephrase your thesis statement.
ReplyDeleteWhere are the 3 topic sentences? It should be written in a complete sentence, okay.
You have a very longgggg hook. Please, your hook can be break into at least 2 hooks for the same essay. Think about it.