Ahmad Zakirin Sidqi b Abdullah/16282/EE
Hook:- “The true love will end, if one of us die” , “No other girls can replace you”.
These are the examples of the sweet talker. They always like to give hopes, loves, compliments and sweet promises. Sweet talkers are also known as CASANOVA, PLAYBOY, and PLAYER. They are very easy to end the relationship, but how?
Background Info: Because of money, ego, appearance and power they can do whatever they like.
Thesis Statement: In this situation, there are three best way to end the relationship easily. First, give clarity to her. Then, self honesty and last be a sweet talker.
Body Paragraph 1: Give clarity to her.
Make sure you understand why you are doing it. Sometimes the surface reason is not the real reason. Dig deep within yourself to find the real reason. Being surrounded by the situation can cloud your judgment. Separate yourself from the situation and spend some alone time. This will help you gain the clarity you need.
Body Paragraph 2: Self Honesty.
Make the commitment to be honest with yourself and the other person. The truth will set you free. Be committed to that.
Body Paragraph 3: Be a sweet talker.
This is the last resort. You just give a promise, but do not fulfil the promise. Example, “ Don’t worry, if we break off. I’ll never ever search the other girls. I’m ready waiting for you in future. I promise”. After that, leave her.
Conclusion: There are many way to end the relationship . All three example are the most effective. If you want to be more professional in break off . Just follow the person who is Casanova. That's all from me.. thank you.
Love the title. Love the 1st part of your hook but why is it too long. It should be 2 sentences the most.
ReplyDeleteBe careful with your sentence structure, i.e grammar.
You need to write a complete sentence for your Topic Sentence.
The 1st 2 sentences in your conclusion are acceptable but not the rest of it. You need to be clear and this is not a speech, okay.