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Tuesday, 28 June 2011

Academic writing outline(how to end a relationship)

IVAN TAN SHENG WEI 16368 EE

HOOK:
Being in a relationship is one of the most wonderful thing in a human's life. Unfortunately, most beginning must have an ending.

Backround info:
-Ending a relationship is not as easy as it seems.
-It is very challenging as we human have a very complicated feelings.
-Unfortunately, in some situation ending a relationship may seem to be the only way.

Thesis:
Out of so many ways in ending a relationship, I have found out 3 of the common ways which are the harsh way, the soft way and the forcing way.

Body 1
+Topic sentences
The harsh way in here means breaking up with your couple by using harsh words and will totally hurt his or her feeling.

Support.
- This way usually involves telling the truth which the weakness that cant be accepted.
-Usually the couple will not be friends anymore.
-this way is less encouraging.

Body 2
+topic sentence
The Harsh way is bad so people with a better heart will choose the soft way.

+support
-By using softer and less harsher words.
-This way usually doesn't tell the real truth of the ending of relationship.
-The words or vocabulary used are intend to please the opposite sex such as' you are just too good for me'.

Body 3
+Topic sentence
Finally, if both of the above way doesn't work to end the relationship is by using the forcing way.

+support
-The forcing way usually is about exposing an exaggerate own self's weakness or bad habit.
-This will annoy the other half of the couple and in excess will cause breaking ups between couple.
-In desperate times, we can also create own weakness and bad habit just to make the other half in a relationship to offer the end of relationship voluntarily.

Conclusion:
There are still a lot of ways to end a relationship between a couple.
The three ways stated above are the common ones and each brings a different result, use at own risk.
Therefore, before we end a relationship or breaking up , we must be considerate and try to minimize the injury done to other people.
The mentally injury is worst than a physically injury.

1 comment:

  1. Hook : Being in a relationship can be troublesome and hectic .Hence it should be ended if it reaches that point.

    Background info:1.Ending a relationship is easy .
    2.To end a relationship you must be frank and devlishly creative
    3.You must be very sure to end the relationship.

    Thesis statement: There are many ways to end an awry relationship , but in my opinion there are three front runners.First is to be frank to your soon to be ex -lifemate.Second is to have a facial and identity reconfiguration for the persistent exxes. And last but not least is for the cowardly people, that is to make a phone call to cut the relationship.

    Body 1 : + Being frank when ending a relationship is the fastest and easiest way to end one.

    Support 1 : + By being truthfull to the person you can end the relationship very fast. You must be frank by telling the person why you want to end the relationship so that the person does not pesteryou to still be together

    Body 2 : + having a total makeover of identity will ensure that the person will not recognise or even track you down.

    Support 2: +By having a total makeover you willchange not only your appearence but also your identity ensuring only family and people close to you will recognise you. This isthe way to totally move away from persistent partners.

    Body 3 : + The easiest way would be to make a phone call and end the relationship.

    Support 3: + This way is for the cowardly partners who do not have the guts to end the relationship face to face.

    Conclusion : These are the three main ways toend an awry relationship .There are many other ways but in my opinion these are the best. These ways must only be used when you aresure that the current relationship is exarcabating your life then use these methods. Warning these could be mental and spirit damager.

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